New pop tune!

Wow has it been a LONG time since I've written a pop tune. My journaling yesterday sort of inspired this... and the lyrics are very loosely based off of it. Here's what I've got so far:

V1:
Unspoken words between the lines get hard to read when you say those things.
So juxtaposing , unsuspecting.. This game has lost its entertaining flare.
Can’t bare to play it anymore.
V2:
Un-touching hands brush casually in crowded rooms and empty halls.
You give me reasons, find excuses. It’s easy now where once was so taboo.
Yet you won’t take it past this point.
Bridge:
And in the end I know it’s unavailing. But you know I hate to disappoint…
Chorus:
Why should I care? You tell me not to please the world. So please don’t give me that.
How can I be, when you intimidate me? Can’t speak my mind with you, and you won’t let me know.
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There you have it. I'm quite pleased with the chord changes, too. I'll most likely finish it tomorrow and record it (to bad my voice is SO outrageously out of shape... *sigh*)